Compare 1st and Last

From my first speech to my last, I have improved a lot. At the beginning I was nervous and did not prepare as much as I should. This resulted in pausing a lot and forgetting what to say. My last speech I did I was much more confident and this showed as it was much more smooth and clearer. I was able to keep eye contact with the class during the whole speech and used hand gestures when necessary. After watching professional speakers I learned how to give a speech much more comfortably.

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In this speech I prepared longer than I have done with my prior speeches, this resulted in talking and presenting smooth. I looked at all of the audience and had interesting facts that kept them interested. My tone was better than my previous speeches but it can be a little more enthusiastic. For the next speeches I need to talk louder and have more to say about each detail.